Scrap Race Text Description, needs proof read
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Hello,
The written description for "Scrap Race" needs a proof read, the sentence "Unlike human life is entertainment the most valuable commodity and we offer the absolute finest!" could use a little love as it doesn't make sense. It is close enough that I understand the message/sentiment intended to be portrayed, but it should be re-written.
Thanks folks!
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